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revelationSkin hides veins,  muscles, fat, bones,  things that aren't as  obvious as your eyes  or smile or voice.   
They are as much a part  of you as memories,  touches, words, movements.   
Things get lost in the  daily course of loving  but I try to recognize  it all. revelation
by ~fragilemacabre
where the woods meet the cityhe said my expressive  eyes, clear and light  held steel doors clamped  with a combination code.  sometimes he swore  he'd cracked a few numbers  and the slats would lift--   
they slammed shut.  every time.   
he never wanted  to see the secrets  kept behind them.   
he just wanted  
to be the only one  breaking the lock   
 
and it just isn't him. where the woods meet the city
by ~fragilemacabre
mythosall my victories are pyrrhic,  you say to yourself.  you think it sounds like lyrics  or maybe like poetry  but it's only the truth  you can't admit without  melodramatics or sarcasm,  misplaced wit to ease  the tension emerging  between words. mythos
by ~fragilemacabre
there are nightsthere are nights   
to break things  just to end this silence  there are nights  to start fights  just to startle the inertia   
but there's alcohol  and nicotine  sad slow songs  and stupid dreams  that keep me  from sleep  and from you   
and on account  of winter and its  endless sooty sky  i'll stay as still  as these stimulants  will allow  in hopes to quiet  the clamor rising  like fat above water there are nights
by ~fragilemacabre
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Our last waltz
by =endless-one
Lovers and LiarsI don't stand a chance.   
That's what I thought while I was            climbing the stairs to the seduction scene.   
Same time you're thinking                  "I can't seriously distress her."   
Pushing the door, I'm all mechanical flutters for your masochistic stutters.  You turn slowly, smiling.        You're smiling.. but there are tears in your eyes.  How was I to know that you could still get to me?                        You stitch my lips shut so my jaw won't drop.  No "are you ready's".  
It's just unstitch and no promises.                        Dropp Lovers and Liars
by ~yournotagoodbye
Quick Tips Part 3, MiscellanyIII.  Miscellany   
Poets: Stop trying only to capture emotion.  Any thirteen-year-old having a bad hair day can write with emotion and add line breaks.  Since we all share the same small set of emotions, why should the reader care about your love when they have or had their own?  Make the emotion new and different; set it apart as something unique.  Emotion plus unique (non-cliched) images, metaphor, and maybe symbolism and/or an idea behind it?  Tightly-knit nouns and verbs light on the modifiers, articles, and other filler?  All this and sound devices? &nb Quick Tips Part 3, Miscellany
by ^SparrowSong
Quick Tips Part 2, WritingII. Writing steps   
Experiment with writing all kinds of literature.  Poets, try writing prose.  Prose writers, try writing poetry.  Try poetic prose and prose poetry.  Scripts, anyone?   
Experiment with styles and forms.  Write pieces in the styles of other writers.  This should be easy if you’ve done a little critiquing and have learned how to identify literary devices.  Use all of them.  Use meters in at least half a dozen pieces.  Save end-rhyme for last.   
Experiment with symbolism.  Experiment with me Quick Tips Part 2, Writing
by ^SparrowSong
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on writing

Tue May 26, 2009, 10:22 PM
  • Mood: dA Love
  • Reading: Delta of Venus -- Anais Nin
  • Drinking: Little Penguin white wine
Reading ^SparrowSong's treatises on writing makes me want to take down nearly all of my gallery (even though I hid 90% of it recently). It also makes me want to revise everything.

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  • Current Residence: jersey city
  • Interests: words, books, letters, sex, alcohol, people
  • Favourite movie: Fight Club, Donnie Darko, Nightmare Before Xmas, No Country For Old Men, High Fidelity, Waiting...
  • Favourite band or musician: Against Me!, Say Anything, AFI, Placebo, Bright Eyes, Lou Reed, Brand New, TBS, Ani Difranco
  • Favourite genre of music: Rock n' roll, electronica, opera, musicals.
  • Favourite poet or writer: Dorothy Parker, Marge Piercy, Shakespeare, Evelyn Waugh, Neil Gaiman, Leonard Cohen.
  • Favourite photographer: Molly Gold
  • Favourite style of art: Portrait
  • MP3 player of choice: iPod (i sold out)
  • Favourite game: You Have To Burn the Rope
  • Favourite cartoon character: Sally, Jack Skellington, Biker Mice from Mars, the Sandman characters, Hoops and Yoyo
  • Personal Quote: and darling, oh, it breaks my heart each time you... -- tegan and sara
  • Tools of the Trade: Pen, paper, digital cameras, blackberry, and life.

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~Alko-xD:iconAlko-xD: Apr 3, 2009, 11:36:15 AM
Спасибо за фаворита ^__^)/
Thanks for the fav ^__^)/

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I know English very badly!>__<
~AmyInWonderland:iconAmyInWonderland: Mar 18, 2009, 1:02:38 PM
Much thanks for the fav! :handshake:

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"I've found the secret to life. I'm okay when everything is not okay." ~ Tori Amos
~AlperEsin:iconAlperEsin: Dec 8, 2008, 6:31:50 PM
ty for fav, i am glad you like it. naughty hat :P

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:devart:
~starkreality:iconstarkreality: Sep 18, 2008, 12:49:51 PM
Here's to missing you. :)

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5x2 + 2xz2 + 5y6 + 15y4 + 5z2 = 15y5 + 5y3
That's what I'm waiting for.

Alla himlens orglar skulle varit för oss...
Mood: Wow! ~PEACOCKblue:iconPEACOCKblue: Oct 6, 2007, 2:58:03 PM
Yo, hi.....
See you, when I see you, neh.....
~AKA-Trent:iconAKA-Trent: Jun 14, 2007, 5:23:52 AM
guess whos nback on da.... with actual work thi stime@
~jadedfey:iconjadedfey: Jan 9, 2007, 10:40:34 AM
allo!

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My Heart is Mine and Mine Alone!
Mood: Love ~Nikelyn:iconNikelyn: Oct 17, 2006, 7:20:40 PM
thanks for adding my 'thinking' to ur favs...[link]
Caring

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.:: Nikelyn ::. The Child Inside The Artist
~AlmightyGammy:iconAlmightyGammy: Sep 6, 2006, 8:05:10 AM
Thanks for the watch! :]
~Alchornea:iconAlchornea: Aug 25, 2006, 7:59:42 AM
thank You very much for :+fav: :)

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so here you are, demons screaming in your head
you try to shut them out but they just get louder instead
~AKA-Trent:iconAKA-Trent: Aug 20, 2006, 4:25:30 PM
how are things im back.
~theholdenhour:icontheholdenhour: Apr 24, 2006, 8:48:41 PM
much thanks for the watch.

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in an instant i realized time had no point
=LoganX78:iconLoganX78: Mar 30, 2006, 3:59:13 PM
Tnx a lot for the :+fav: on Black'n'White Kiss :)

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... La vita è fatta di priorità...
[my gallery] [my prints] [my journals]
~PERMAsleep:iconPERMAsleep: Mar 26, 2006, 6:47:38 PM
I keel you, Susannah! I finally decided to do something with DA. <3
-Mayari
`Bringa:iconBringa: Mar 26, 2006, 10:27:08 AM
Hi

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SINAI BENDS
~drowning-slowly:icondrowning-slowly: Mar 25, 2006, 10:53:07 AM
^^ I love you babe! thanks for the fav!

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Cheezits
~Freaky-Person:iconFreaky-Person: Mar 23, 2006, 3:33:32 PM
I just read over your fabourite authors and realised you don't have Terry Pratchett and now I must pretty much advertise his writing to you. He's an awsome comedy/Fantasy writer!!!

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“Remember that sometimes the road to love, is paved with dead squirrels.” – Lode Runner

I'm bad at physics cause I can't think outside the box. Hell, I'm so far in it I can't even see the walls!!
~flames:iconflames: Mar 22, 2006, 4:09:21 PM
Thank you very much for the favorite on "mango delights". It's very much appreciated :heart:

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if santa really existed, he would have the testicular fortitude to show himself.
~bluetiger47:iconbluetiger47: Feb 22, 2006, 10:46:00 PM
Thanks so much for the fav on 'Simple Dreams' :)

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"As a ninja, I entertain no notion of desire......Except for jello...." - Bloody Shadow :trout:
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